Saturday, October 26, 2024

"The Whispering Walls of Hawthorne Manor" - By: Klutzycutie

 



They said Hawthorne Manor was haunted. For years, it loomed on the hill like a scar, its towering chimneys clawing at the sky, the ivy wrapping it like a sinister embrace. People avoided it, but rumors couldn’t stay quiet. They spoke of footsteps echoing down empty hallways, of ghostly figures appearing in windows, and of whispers heard from rooms left untouched for decades.

But no one could verify the tales. No one dared stay long enough to try.

Until one autumn night, when five friends, thrill-seekers with a love of the paranormal, decided to spend the night there. Matt, the ringleader, had organized it, selling it to his friends as "the ultimate Halloween thrill." His twin sister, Claire, was the skeptic, rolling her eyes at the thought of “another cliché haunted house.” But something about Hawthorne Manor was different. Even Claire felt it—an unease, the cold weight of silence that pressed down on them as they made their way to the house.

The group stood outside the mansion, the crunch of fallen leaves beneath their boots. The windows were black, like eyes that held old, unfathomable secrets.

“Just an old house,” Matt said with a forced grin, holding up a flashlight. “We’ll be fine.”

They stepped inside. The floorboards groaned in protest under their weight, the air thick with dust and decay. Shadows danced on the walls as their flashlights flickered. The wallpaper was peeling, showing dark, cracked plaster beneath. Claire shivered; it was colder inside than she expected, even for an October night.

The group moved through the house, stopping to examine old portraits, Victorian furniture draped in sheets, and a grand staircase spiraling up into darkness. They decided to split up—Matt and Claire took the west wing while the others explored the east.

“Nothing here but dust and disappointment,” Claire muttered as they crept down a hallway, her voice barely louder than a whisper. But Matt wasn’t so sure. Something had stirred inside him since they entered, a low hum of something close to dread. The shadows seemed to watch them, to lean closer as they passed.

Then they heard it—a faint whisper, drifting through the walls. It was soft, almost melodic, like a lullaby.

“Did you hear that?” Matt asked, his voice dropping.

Claire swallowed. “Probably just the wind. Old houses make sounds.”

But she didn’t quite believe it.

They reached a door at the end of the hall. It was different from the others, painted a deep, unsettling red. Matt’s fingers closed around the doorknob. It felt warm, almost pulsing. He opened it slowly, and they stepped inside.

The room was large, and strangely pristine, as if someone had just left it. The faint smell of lavender lingered in the air. Velvet curtains framed tall windows, letting in a trickle of moonlight. There was a bed in the center, its quilt pulled back as if inviting them to stay.

That’s when they saw it—a figure, ghostly white, drifting by the window, almost gliding. Claire stifled a scream. The figure turned, its hollow eyes seeming to fix on them, mouth open as if caught mid-scream. It hovered, a pale wisp of a woman, her face blurred yet somehow familiar.

“Run!” Matt hissed, grabbing Claire’s arm. But as they bolted from the room, the woman’s soft whispers filled the hall, following them like a ghostly melody.

They found their friends back in the main hall, all pale-faced, each with their own tales of strange encounters. Ethan swore he’d heard footsteps following him, while Lily claimed she saw the shadow of a man standing by the fireplace. The stories grew wilder, the fear real. But something about it didn’t sit right with Claire.

“Let’s go upstairs,” she said finally, more to herself than the others.

They climbed the grand staircase, their footsteps echoing in the silence. On the landing was another red door, identical to the one they’d found earlier. This time, Claire opened it. The room was identical too—a bed, curtains, the smell of lavender.

But this time, she noticed something else. A camera, hidden in the corner, blinking a tiny red light.

“What the…?” She walked over, inspecting it.

The realization hit her. She spun around, looking at the others.

“We’re not alone,” she said. “And this house—it’s watching us.”

Just then, the doors slammed shut, trapping them in the room. A screen flickered to life on the wall, showing their own terrified faces staring back at them.

And then came the voice. Slow, deliberate, and all too human.

"Welcome to Hawthorne Manor’s Haunt Experience. You’ve just survived… or almost survived… the scariest night of your lives."

“What?” Ethan gasped, laughing out of sheer disbelief.

The doors opened, and from behind the walls, costumed actors poured out, some dressed as ghosts, others in shadows and whispers that had filled the night. Each one stepped forward, peeling back the layers of mystery they’d woven.

The house wasn’t haunted—not by ghosts, anyway. It was a setup, a massive, orchestrated haunted house experience. A thrill ride for those brave or foolish enough to venture inside. Every flicker, every whisper, every shadow—it had been part of a twisted show.

Matt and Claire’s faces went pale. The whispers, the footsteps—it had all been staged, a performance.

“Happy Halloween!” one of the actors said, grinning beneath a mask.

And as the friends staggered out into the cool, predawn air, they couldn’t decide whether to be relieved or furious. But one thing was certain: they’d never forget the night Hawthorne Manor almost made them believe in ghosts.

Or, as they glanced back at the darkened windows, perhaps it still did.

(If you have come all the way and read the entire story I just want to say thank you so much for reading my short story. Just wanted to write a little something before Halloween. If you would like to hear more short stories in the future let me know! I’ll be sure to write a few in future posts. Thanks again for reading!)

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